I think I’m getting better at human perspective, but that doesn’t excuse all the talking heads.  *growls*

Sadly, with the way the script is going, I don’t want to force a re-write and risk chopping up the story into little, oddly place bits that make no sense.  I’ll keep going with what I’ve got until the end of this chapter, and then take a look at building better action sequences into the next one.

Whee!  Learning is fun!

Oh, and your TNATuesday is late.  I started it, but I’d like to do a little bit of refining before posting this time.  Another Tuesday post on Wednesday, hurrah!

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